Rose
Beginning to blossom, a delicate rose bud
She waits for the tide to wash away the mud,
Wide eyed and hopeful, like a pearl in the sand
Then tenderly she carries it, cradled in her hands.
Like a child chasing butterflies, she runs up the path
Wonder enlightening, and she begins to laugh
As the sun burns brightly in joyous azure skies
I watch her hopeful seeking with tears in my eyes.
Helpless to stop her, as she tries to share her find
One after another, they turn away, blind
She wilts, tears glistening, hands drooping beside
And turns away alone again, her treasure to hide.
I call her name, she turns to me, with sorrow in her eyes
I reach to her, and gently start to brush away the lies -
Lies that tell her she has nothing worthy to impart
And like a balm, I whisper words of truth to her heart.
I tell her how I glimpse the beauty cradled in her hands
I tell her how God made those pearls, glinting in the sands
And as the waves of truth wash away rejection’s mud
The heart revealed in her hand’s a delicate rose bud.
23 comments:
there is such a huge amount of tenderness and love in this poem Zoe...what a splendid comparison you made in-here...wonderful! :)
hugs,
Lilly
Thanks Lilly! My heart really does break when I see such things. I pray that there is always someone to appreciate the beauty of another's heart, no matter how young they are.
This is a wonderful poem, full of care and consideration. Lovely.
Tenderness all the way, beutifully written!
Ina - thank you! It is good to share it, I must admit :)
Eclipse - thank you too!
I am honoured that you both stopped by.
Words matter, and too many times people don't take the time to say a few encouraging kind words. Everyone needs encouragement. Everyone!
Wonderful poem, Zoe. Full of compassion and wisdom. I like it!
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Marbles - you are soo right - Everyone does need encouragment. And I certainly appreciate yours! Thank you!
such a sweet and tender piece
Oh my gosh, I think this is my favorite poem ever!
Hi Jo, and thank you!
Benjity - wow, that is high praise. Thank you too.
I'm glad you both stopped by.
what a gem talent, wow.
your words delight,
Happy Rally.
:)
Awh, my favorite lines:
"Wide eyed and hopeful, like a pearl in the sand
Then tenderly she carries it, cradled in her hands."
Beautiful imagery and love the font/layout!
Morning - you are truly so kind, thank you!
Pamanner - I confess those are probably my favourite lines too! Thank you for your kind thoughts too. :)
This reminded me of the rose in the Little Prince.
A sweet poem.:)
Hi Nel, I will have to look that one up. :)
What a beautiful sweet poem - the imagery you created was vivid and breathtaking :) Thank you for sharing!
Zoe, your words are worthy to impart. Thx for sharing them.
sadness and joy always seems to see the heart in different shades.
Nice read.
ZQ
love your poetic whispering,
smiles.
Happy Rally.
Curse - thank you! I am glad you liked it.
Bar None - (smile) nice twist back on me. Thank you. :)
ZQ - I think you are right - sadness and joy are so unique in interpretation.
Orange Tree - good to see you again, and thank you once more!
elegant wording, your way of poeticizing us amazing,
invite you to join our poetry picnic today,
1 to 3 random poems are welcome for first time participants, you can also write for our theme,
best.
hope to see your participation.
i love what you see and share -- you bloom! :)
Bended spoon,
Thank you! I think we all need to bloom. :)
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