I actually wrote this last week, but this week's Magpie prompt (thanks once again, Tess!) just kicked these emotions to the front in full force again. Definitely feeling a bit city bound at the moment. And when that happens, when I am tired, my thoughts fly to moonlit nights in the countryside. A bit idyllic, I suppose, but that's fine by me :) I hope you enjoy it too.
Somewhere
Somewhere
Beyond the lamplight’s baleful glare
Stars sing silently
Somewhere
Beyond the concrete’s looming hulk
Planets flicker endlessly
Somewhere
Beyond the slick surface of civilisation
The universe gazes patiently
I stand unmoving
The pavement’s cracked inflexibility
Lashing city bound feet
That groan with longing
For release.
I question the moon
Faint and alone in the orange glow
That hides the sparkle of galaxies
Around her.
Her answer calls me
Where my feet cannot take me.
As I close my eyes, my vision flees
Beyond the street’s impartial prison
Into the night.
* * *
I watch her pale eyes dissolving the ties
Binding me to the roads down below
And hear on the breeze, the whisper of trees
Entreating and pleading, insisting I follow
Their murmuring branches soften and sigh
Their rustling leaves brush and sweep through my hair
I slip from their chatter to bark that is gleaming
Its smooth imperfections by moonlight laid bare
I breathe in its promise of moist verdant fullness
Resounding from trunk to the roots deep and low
Then dance on the scent of sun softened earth
Life springing soil caressing each toe.
I splash from its warmth to the hush of the ocean
That rush silken waters to welcome my feet
Cleansing life’s grime as its saltiness carries me
Heaven gleams brighter and burdens retreat.
And so with a sigh of longing contentment
This respite slips quietly out of my hand.
Seeing the stars growing dim in their splendour
I whisper a gentle adieu to this land
My eyes open once more on daily existence
Buoyed by those moments of peace in the night
Whose stars gilt the rivers 'neath luminous trees
And murmuring oceans reflect the moon’s light.
10 comments:
Beautifully written...
nice...really well done...the repititon in the opening sets a nice pace and when you step away from it this really starts to flow...def beautifully written...
A delicious getaway. Dreamy but with solid imagery.
All of this and a get-away car to transport you! I really enjoyed your poem.
Berowne - thank you! I'm glad you stopped by and enjoyed it.
Brian - I really appreciate your comments because I was trying to use the difference in form to draw out the contrast, so it is good to know that it communicated that! Thank you indeed!
Tumblewords - I am so glad you think so! I love those mental and emotional getaways myself, but am never sure how well I share it! Thank you.
Helen - didn't really think of the car as the transport! Neat idea! In my mind, I usually fly to these getaways. I'm glad you stopped by too. :)
Ah...after I read your poetry I feel like we have had a wonderful visit. Lovely Zoe!
wonderful imagery
The pavement’s cracked inflexibility
Lashing city bound feet
Thank goodness our imaginations can transport us elsewhere...
love your poetry talent, my friend, smiles.
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Orange Tree -
Wow!!! Thank you so much for your encouragement and the invitation - count me in!
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